The romance in the ritual
Making of two smiles into one
The music in the chant
Timeless wisdom in the here & now
Her unflinching love
His fear of being held captive
Oppression gets registered,
Beauty goes amiss!
(thanks Aditi for the photo)
The romance in the ritual
Making of two smiles into one
The music in the chant
Timeless wisdom in the here & now
Her unflinching love
His fear of being held captive
Oppression gets registered,
Beauty goes amiss!
(thanks Aditi for the photo)
8 comments:
You're welcome! and thanks for the expression into words!
You're welcome Aditi.
I wish it were:
Her unflinching love
His craving of being held captive
Companionship gets registered,
Beauty gets enhanced!
I wanted to say:
His craving of being held captivated.
Very well expressed Vi :)
@Rafiki: Thanks. that's a different line altogether, though
@Sush: Thanks.
U have captured a very special moment in these lines! Good job!
@medhini: Thanks!
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