Jul 5, 2010

Union


The fire that binds, originally uploaded by Aditi Patnaik.

The romance in the ritual
Making of two smiles into one

The music in the chant
Timeless wisdom in the here & now

Her unflinching love
His fear of being held captive

Oppression gets registered,
Beauty goes amiss!

(thanks Aditi for the photo)

8 comments:

Aditi Das Patnaik said...

You're welcome! and thanks for the expression into words!

Sleepyface said...

You're welcome Aditi.

Rafiki said...

I wish it were:
Her unflinching love
His craving of being held captive

Companionship gets registered,
Beauty gets enhanced!

Rafiki said...

I wanted to say:
His craving of being held captivated.

Sush said...

Very well expressed Vi :)

Sleepyface said...

@Rafiki: Thanks. that's a different line altogether, though

@Sush: Thanks.

Medhini said...

U have captured a very special moment in these lines! Good job!

Sleepyface said...

@medhini: Thanks!