May 9, 2007

Difficult times

You come and stay,
hint now n then you may
go away

is it an illusion
that you've been gone?

or is it an illusion
that you're here?

none-the-less you make
me wiser at the end of the day


Update: Doodler came up with the idea of a haiku, so, this post haiku-ed would be:
Difficult times
isn't it an illusion?
which makes us wiser

3 comments:

Doodler said...

short n very nice..even shorter it would have been a haiku of sorts! : )

Sleepyface said...

thanks. now that you've mentioned it, haiku will be tried!

Doodler said...

cool..this is great!